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Showing posts with label Aboriginal Texts. Show all posts
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Tuesday, October 31, 2023

The Civil Rights Movement - Further Reading

A couple of years ago I had the opportunity to write some chapters for Cambridge University Press's History Transformed series. It was a labour of love and, best of all, it gave me an excuse to read a whole bunch of history books. 

One of the chapters I contributed was focused on the NSW syllabus's Rights and Freedoms core study for Stage 5. I found that I accumulated a lot of notes in my research, far more than I was able to use for the textbook, so this is as good a time as any to share an overview of useful texts for any teachers looking to deepen their knowledge of 20th century Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander histories, and/or other aspects of the Rights and Freedoms core study.

Bringing Them Home report (Government Document, 1997)

  • The Stolen Generations report is essential reading for anyone who wants to gain a more empathetic understanding of what is perhaps Australia's greatest 20th century historical shame. This document can be easily found online and includes firsthand testimonies from many of those who identify as part of the Stolen Generations.

Thinking Black by Bain Attwood and Andrew Markus (Book, 2004)

  • An account of 1930s Aboriginal activist William Cooper and his role in the Day of Mourning.
The 1967 Referendum by Bain Attwood and Andrew Markus (Book, 2007)
  • How it happened, what happened, and what the long term impact was - this book is a great explainer of the watershed referendum. 
Bearing the Cross by David J. Garrow (Book, 1986)
  • I only had limited time to delve into the U.S. movement as my focus needed to predominantly be on Australia, so I really wanted to sink my teeth into a book that would cover Martin Luther King Jr.'s campaigns in more than suitable detail. Bearing the Cross is exactly that book; a methodical and comprehensive look at MLK's role in the American Civil Rights movement that encompasses Rosa Parks, the Montgomery Bus Boycott, the powderkeg events in Birmingham that galvanised America, and a whole range of other historically significant events that link back to King. The perfect overview for an Australian reader wanting to look at the wider context for all the major events of the 1950s and '60s African-American Civil Rights Movement. 
Breath of Life by Kevin Gilbert and Eleanor Williams (Gallery Program, 1996)
  • Published in connection to an art museum installation, if you can find this (check your local university or state library) it contains a lot of great background information on the Tent Embassy, Mabo and Native Title, and protests in the 1990s. As Kevin Gilbert had passed away three years earlier in 1993, this functions in some part as a preservation of the renowned activist's voice.
Invasion to Embassy by Heather Goodall (Book, 1996)
  • An overview of a whole range of 20th century events in Aboriginal activism - includes stuff on the controversial Aboriginal-authored 1930s newspaper The Abo Call, the early civil rights movement as pioneered by Bill Ferguson and Jack Patten in the same era, the Cummeragunja Strike, and the Tent Embassy. 
Aboriginal Affairs: Seeking a Solution 1967-2005 by Max Griffiths (Book, 2006)
  • This book is especially useful for NSW History teachers as it focuses on years that comprise the main part of the Stage 5 Core Study. Includes the Land Rights struggle, Mabo, Wik, the Tent Embassy, the Aboriginal Black Power Movement, Paul Keating's role, Redfern, and Yirrkala. 
Aboriginal Reconciliation by Justin Healey (Policy Textbook, 2006)
  • Overview of the Reconciliation movement, traces cause and effect from 2006 back to 1918, and puts forward primary source arguments for the Apology two years before it happened. Invaluable if you can find a copy!
Indigenous Rights by Justin Healey (Policy Textbook, 2014)
  • Outlines the then-ongoing response to recent events, including the 2008 Apology, the UN Declaration on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples, and the Northern Territory Intervention.
Yami: The Autobiography by Yami Lester (Book, 1993)
  • I put this one in here because it connects to a part of Australian history that doesn't get talked about nearly enough: the UK testing of atomic weapons on Australian soil. I first heard about such a thing through Paul Kelly's haunting song Maralinga. This memoir provides a firsthand account of Yami Lester, the Aboriginal man mentioned in that song, who was blinded by the Maralinga Nuclear Bomb tests while living in the outback. 
Wandjuk Marika: A Life Story by Wandjuk Marika and Jennifer Isaacs (Book, 1995)
  • This biography was created in consultation with Marika himself and the extensive use of his own words makes it as close to an autobiography as we were ever likely to get from the pivotal Arnhem Land activist. Marika was one of the Yolngu people's foremost representatives throughout the 1960s, 70s, and 80s. In terms of historical significance, Marika was instrumental in both the historic Gove Land Rights case and the delivery of the Yirrkala Bark Petition. 
Protest, Land Rights and Riots by Barry Morris (Book, 2013)
  • A modern overview of more recent events (the 1980s and 1990s) that aren't really covered elsewhere in this list (EG. The Brewarrina Riot, and Deaths in Custody). 
Charles Perkins by Peter Read (Book, 1990)
  • Perkins has an autobiography that he wrote in 1975 (A Bastard Like Me) but this authorised 1990 biography has a bit more distance that allows for a broader look at events in historical context. Read utilises interview transcripts with Perkins to reconstruct the activist's role in the Aboriginal Civil Rights Movement. Provides a good account of the Australian Freedom Rides.
Why Weren't We Told? by Henry Reynolds (Book, 1999)
  • The landmark reflection of white realisation in response to the revelations of the Bringing Them Home report, in which the Stolen Generations were brought much more broadly to the public's attention. 
The Forgotten War by Henry Reynolds (Book, 2013)
  • A history of the Australian Aboriginal Rights Movement. An interest text as it looks at the activists themselves and their fight for change rather than the more-discussed history they were reacting to.
This list is by no means complete. There's a wealth of material available and the ongoing historiography of the Civil Rights Movement means that there is more great material being released all the time. Anyway, hopefully there's something above that might be helpful! 

Monday, July 24, 2023

Author Mentors: Ellen Van Neerven and Theme


This is Part 3 in a series on 'Author Mentors'. In a nutshell, these lessons are about using short extracts to scaffold student engagement; a way of backward mapping from the NSW Year 12 Craft of Writing module and the Year 11 Reading to Write module before that. 

After looking at context and structure, today's sample lesson moves into more conceptual territory - what an English teacher might traditionally call 'theme'. You will need a copy of Ellen Van Neerven's Young Adult anthology Heat and Light for the extract that forms the crux of these activities.

1. Extract. Start by reading a selected extract from Heat and Light as a class. The extract in question is from the first page of the short story 'Hot Stones'. It starts with 'Thirteen is the age that makes you,' and ends with 'Go easy. I have to see if we're related, first.'

Students then do a think-pair-share activity, discussing each of the following questions before responding in their books:
  1. Tell me what you liked best about this extract.
  2. Tell me about the main character in the extract.
  3. Tell me how you would feel if you had been kicked out of English.
  4. Tell me about the Grandmother.
  5. Tell me why the main character is so interested in Mia. 
These are fairly straightforward questions designed to gauge comprehension and provoke a personal response. Comprehension is a key part of thematic engagement because the skill of summarising is the very core of what a 'theme' or 'concept' is. If a student is able to summarise something, then they are identifying the most significant aspects of the text. There is some degree of subjectivity in this, which is what we (the teachers) want because identifying or responding to a theme in a text is a highly subjective process. The more that a student is able to take a firm and individual position, the more they will find success in crafting a thesis for an extended response. 

In some Gifted and Talented/High Potential and Gifted Education circles, summarising leads to the higher order skill of abstraction; the ability to think of things in terms of concepts rather than plot points. 

2. Connecting. Once students have begun grappling with the text at a surface comprehension level (and perhaps deeper), move on to looking at the connections that can be made with the text. Again, this should be a subjective experience for each student. It doesn't matter how an outsider may judge the 'quality' of the student's answers, what's important is said student's ability to create their own connections when reading. The process of generating ideas of how to connect the text to other things is an entire step on its own before we look at guiding students in calling upon more judicious examples. Some students may struggle to make what the teacher sees as an effective connection, but this is why we look at doing this in Stage 5 or earlier... it's part of that backward mapping process that fosters skills needed for Year 11 and 12.

Anyway, ask students to connect: 
  1. To Self - What is something you have in common with or something that makes you different from Colin?
  2. To Text - What is a similarity that this extract shares with another text?
  3. To World - What is something from the wider world or history that you can relate to this extract?
3. Considering Theme. Now we're ready for the final part of the activity. After thinking about the text in a few different ways, students are then asked to reflect and develop on their ideas. This starts with a prompt to concentrate the extract into a single-word abstraction. Students are then asked to develop this into a statement of theme, which is essentially a scaffolded way of getting students to develop a mini-thesis, or a conceptual understanding of the extract. Concept, idea, abstraction, or theme - it doesn't matter what you call it, it all supports the process of writing an essay.
  1. If you had to summarise this extract as being about something in a single word, what would it be?
  2. What opinion do you think the author might have about the single word you just wrote?
  3. What do you think the extract is saying about this word?
  4. You've now developed a thematic understanding of the extract. Find three quotes that support this theme.
  5. Explain exactly how each quote supports your thematic understanding.
It is entirely possible to take this further by delving into structural territory and looking at techniques used, etc., but I would personally keep the focus tightly on theme. This reinforces the cognitive purity of the lesson in teaching one key thing. 

The above lesson can be found as a PowerPoint here

Acknowledgment: The following material has been adapted and modified specifically for this blog. I would like to acknowledge some of my colleagues - Ashleigh Galea, Lauren Hage, Amra Winter - who helped develop some additional material not included here.

Wednesday, May 3, 2023

Oddments: Five unique texts on the current NSW HSC Prescriptions List

I've been working a bit on researching NSW's Prescribed Texts these past few years and, as we approach the current list's long journey into the night before the next round, I thought this might be a good time to look at some of the more unusual texts on the list.  I say 'unusual texts' but I should clarify that, when I say this, I'm not speaking about a text's subject matter or themes or genre as that's a little too subjective. I want to instead highlight the more textually-distinct outliers - the solitary text types and unusually-originated texts that stand out with a hard and firm point of difference. 

Go Back to Where You Came From

Oddity: The only television series option featured across Standard, Advanced, EAL/D, and Extension English.

Description: Go Back to Where You Came From is a carryover text from the previous 'Discovery' Prescriptions List. The television format presents a challenge to teachers as its runtime is essentially twice that of the average film - this can make it difficult to cover within a busy timeframe that also involves student selection of a related text and coverage of the 'Texts and Human Experiences' module. I taught this when it was part of 'Discovery' and, while I did find that students were able to easily engage with it, it felt like quite a slog to cover it properly alongside a related text and an Area of Study. This meant that I did not opt to explore the text as part of 'Texts and Human Experiences' when the opportunity later presented itself.

Contemporary Asian Australian Poets

Oddity: The only multi-poet anthology - between its presence in the Standard and EAL/D English syllabuses this selection includes works from eight different poets.

Description: Whilst the idea of covering so many different poets seems to pose a significant challenge in covering just as many differing contexts, it can actually force a synthesis of ideas as the teacher finds themselves bringing the texts together in service of the module 'Language, Identity, and Culture'. This conceptual underpinning can be a guiding light for students who might overwise struggle to unite separate poems together to support a thesis. It also helps that the poetry is accessible and provides a wide scope for students to make many different kinds of connections.

One Night the Moon

Oddity: A double oddity. One Night the Moon is the only prescribed text across Standard, Advanced, EAL/D, and Extension English that features characters breaking into song. It's also the only non-feature film (too long to be a short film, too short to be a feature film). 

Description: Rachel Perkins' collaboration with Paul Kelly is an achingly poignant depiction of the colonial violence and contradiction in Australia's past. It's also an unusual text outside of the English-teaching context because it's the only time singer-songwriter Paul Kelly has acted on screen. I haven't taught this text but I think it's relatively short length would allow for some useful drilling down into its finer aspects. 

'May the Pen Grace Your Page' by Luka Lesson, and 'Picture a Vacuum' by Kae Tempest

Oddity: Okay, so I'm cheating a little here as this is two texts, but I want to highlight these two as the only poetry performances to be found anywhere in the NSW Prescriptions List. 

Description: The inclusion of these slam poems carries an implication that they should be examined as multimodal performances rather than as written pieces. This is supported by the coding of each text as '(PP)' in the syllabus, meaning 'Performance Poetry' rather than 'Poetry'. The Craft of Writing supporting document from NESA also carries some textual information that suggests this too. This raises some uncomfortable questions about Craft of Writing - specifically the question of how students could be expected to model performance aspects of such a text when writing a piece under HSC examination conditions. 

Actually, I've been puzzled by the inclusion of poetry in Craft of Writing in general as the HSC Module C questions don't seem to allow students the option of composing poetry. But that's perhaps a discussion for another time.

Under Milk Wood

Oddity: The syllabus lists Under Milk Wood as a 'Drama' text but this is a reductive simplification. Over the years the text has been adapted for film, television, and as a stage drama, but its origins are as a radio play. The colour and shape of the text make the most sense in the audio-only format that it was written for. One suspects that the dwindling existence of radio drama led NESA to retroactively reclassify it as just 'Drama', but this does a disservice to the proud tradition of the radio play. 

Description: If you couldn't already tell from my championing of its radio play credentials, I am a big fan of this text. I first taught it because I needed it to make a pattern of study work and I wanted a text that wouldn't be too demanding in terms of having Advanced English students carve off more of their study time for reading. I taught it for these reasons and was very nervous because it is such an odd text and it's so far outside of the natural field of reference for most students in terms of the sorts of texts we usually look at it in English. Anyway, this class engaged with it as intended - by listening to the original Richard Burton-narrated radio dramatisation. We listened to it track-by-track, a few minutes per lesson, and broke the language down, enjoying Thomas's quirky turns of phrase and the games he plays with words. It ended up being one of my favourite thing to teach and quite a few students singled it out at the end of the year as their favorite of the texts we covered. 

Tuesday, March 22, 2022

Mise En Scene - The Sapphires

When teaching film there are a range of things that are considered essential in terms of metalanguage and key skills and understandings. The base understandings seem to be:
  • Camera Angles
  • Shot Sizes
And that's where it ends in terms of consistency. Each teacher, faculty, school tends to deviate from this point with their own idea of how and what should be taught in relation to film. You get things like the following, but it's by no means a prescriptive or universal list:
  • Costuming
  • Set design
  • Editing
  • Camera Movement
  • Lighting
  • Sound Design
Anyway, I'm not seeking to codify Film Studies for NSW schools in this blog post, I just think it's interesting that the approach can vary so much. Another major element in addition to the above list is, of course, mise en scene, and this is something that many teachers do indeed touch upon when teaching film. 

Here's a breakdown of how we could approach mise en scene in the classroom:

Mise en Scene
This is a word used to describe what a director decides to put into a shot. It includes everything - where characters are placed in a scene, what objects feature, how much of the environment can be seen, etc.

Mise en scene can determine power relationships between characters. By placing a character in the centre of the foreground it suggests that they are confident and in power, that they are in charge of the scene, or are important. In contrast, by placing a character in the margins of a scene, or in the background, it suggests that they are not important or without power over their own situation.

Most directors place great importance on mise en scene as it is an essential part of a film's visual language.

(The above summary can be found here as a worksheet with a rudimentary graphic to demonstrate the components - Mise en Scene notes.)

Examples
After students are familiarised or refreshed with the above, you can then look at some examples from The Sapphires (I think this would be a useful film to use with Year 10 for a range of reasons). First, I would look at a modelled response to a screenshot, and then I would ask students to write their own analysis of other shots. Ideally, this would then be linked to some of the themes the class would have looked at in an overall unit on Aboriginal-focused texts (things like cultural identity, experiences of racism, kinship, new experiences, etc.) and used to construct analytical paragraphs. 

Here's the first screenshot I would look at:


Here's the modelled analysis, in which the goal is to get students thinking about the steps towards analysis as much as the analysis itself, as this is something that higher order thinkers can sometimes fail to articulate (IE. Show your working!):

Observations:
  1. Gail is placed in background against curtain, a little to the left.
  2. She is partially obscured by out of focus figures in the audience, and Cynthia is blocked out completely.
  3. The camera has been placed in a way so that the white pub audience is between the viewer and the protagonist.
Analysis: This suggests that Gail is not in a position of power. The out of focus audience makes the shot feel uncomfortable and claustrophobic, and symbolises the restrictions put on Indigenous people trying to perform in this era. Gail is also placed towards the back and to the left, suggesting that she is not of important to this environment (a pub filled with white people).

Here's the screenshots students would then analyse independently:






Here's some notes I made for the above screenshots that could be used to support teachers and students after they'd finished with the analysis section:


Observations:
  1. Julie, Kay and Gail are all placed to the right side of the shot, sharing equal space with the environment.
  2. All three figures are placed in the back of the shot with the camera at a slight low angle.
  3. Julie's shadow is cast to her left as a fourth figure.
Analysis: The slight low angle places the three characters into a position of power (albeit a small one), and the fact that they are standing up against the door represents that they are in the process of being kicked out of the pub. They have been deliberately placed into the boundary of the shot to symbolise their exclusion from the establishment. The shadow could represent the dark, ugly nature of the situation, or even foreshadows the fourth member of the group still yet to appear.


Observations:
  1. Kay and Gail enter into a room, the backs of their heads are placed in the foreground of the shot in close-up.
  2. The rest of the room is filled with bodies moving about - some in the background, and one on either side of the frame (both are only partially visible).
  3. Not all of the environment can be clearly seen.
Analysis: The lack of a close-up on the girls' faces means that the viewer's attention is focused elsewhere, and the number of people all engaged in various activities means that the viewer's focus is split numerous ways - representing the excitement of the party. The partially obscured figures on either side of the frame create a cramped feeling, giving the impression that the party is full of people. 


Observations:
  1. The band is placed in the background of the shot but are brightly lit and spread across the entire frame.
  2. The backs of heads are seen in the bottom foreground of the shot, in silhouette/shadow.
  3. There are no walls on either side of the frame.
Analysis: The crowd is placed low enough in the frame for the viewer to still focus on the band in the background, and the lighting helps direct the viewer's attention in this way as well. The lack of walls/barriers on either side of the frame makes the environment seem more open / pleasant. The heads in the foreground give the impression of a large, engaged audience (compare/contrast to the audience in the modelled shot at the start of this exercise).


Observations:
  1. The car is placed in the centre and foreground of the shot.
  2. The camera is at a slight high angle and far enough away from the car for the car to only take up the lower half of the frame, meaning the environment is easily seen.
  3. The building can be seen on all sides of the car, people have been placed on either side, and the vegetation is almost symmetrical.
Analysis: The viewer is encouraged to put themselves in the place of the car. It's placement in the shot suggests for the viewer to take on the perspective of the girls as they enter the hotel for the first time. The arrangement of the building and vegetation on all sides (and above) the car makes the character seem small in comparison to the environment, suggesting feels of awe and luxury that may connect to the hotel's immense size.


Observations:
  1. Gail and Dave are placed in the centre and foreground, so close to the camera that they are slightly out of focus.
  2. The camera is at a slight low angle, looking upwards at Gail's parents from between Gail and Dave.
  3. Gail's parents are placed almost in the centre of the background looking down towards Gail and Dave, and are in focus. Gail's dad leans up against the post on his verandah. 
Analysis: The audience is put in Gail and Dave's shoes as they face Gail's parents as a couple for the first time. Gail's parents are placed in a position of power, standing higher up in the frame and looking down on Gail and Dave, symbolising the discomfort of the situation and the upper hand they hold in deciding whether they'll accept Dave into their family or not. The verandah takes up the entire background, suggesting its importance in this scene, and Gail's dad leans against the post - which represents that he is connected to this environment, that this is his land and his place. The camera is also focused on Gail's parents because it is their reaction that the viewer is waiting for. 

Here's the above as a worksheet that could be used: Mise en Scene Analysis.

Disclaimer: All the above resources have been created specifically for this blog in my own spare time.