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Sunday, September 1, 2024

Aurora HSC Seminars: 2024

ADVANCED ENGLISH: A digital copy of the Textual Conversations: Hag-Seed and Tempest Module A PowerPoint from the presentation today can be found here:

ADVANCED ENGLISH: A digital copy of the Texts and Human Experiences: Merchant of Venice Common Module PowerPoint from the presentation today can be found here:

STANDARD ENGLISH: A digital copy of the Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time Module B PowerPoint from the presentation today can be found here:

 


Monday, September 5, 2022

Aurora College - Advanced English HSC Seminar Day


Hi students (and teachers), you will find links to my two presentations for the Aurora College HSC Seminar here.

Go here for presentation on Common Module: Texts and Human Experiences - The Merchant of Venice

Go here for presentation on Module A: Textual Conversations - Tempest and Hag-Seed

Happy studying!

Thursday, August 19, 2021

Craft of Writing: Motif, Intertextuality, and Synaesthesia

Hi there! Below you will find three Craft of Writing mini-lessons that support students in practising their writing craft all year-round. You can find a range of other Craft of Writing resources here. The mini-lesson approach involves examining a writing technique in a ten minute segment at the start of each lesson - students are shown how to use the technique, alongside contextual examples, and then asked to put it into practice.

Motif

What is it: An image, sound, action, idea, phrase, word or anything else that repeatedly occurs throughout a text. This is used as a form of symbolism suggestive of a theme or message that the author wants to convey. (See also: symbolism, generic conventions)

Examples:

  • The appearance of straight lines and harsh geometric shapes whenever the rabbit characters are seen in the picture book The Rabbits, which is suggestive of their association with artificial human-made structures. (The Rabbits by John Marsden and Shaun Tan)
  • The repeated references to performance and terms associated with it in Prospero's speeches. (The Tempest by William Shakespeare)
  • Felix's recurring use of metaphorical language associated with magic. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
Why use it:
  • Reinforces the thematic core of a text and helps a writer convey their thesis.
  • Creates another level of communication in the text that can allow some readers to pick up on ideas that they might normally not pick up on.
  • Contributes to a sense of mood or atmosphere in the text. Can reinforce setting with motifs associated with specific generic conventions.
Quick Activity: Accepting that a book is a symbol of knowledge, write a paragraph about an intelligent character washed up on an island that uses this symbol as a motif. It can be the literal inclusion of a book, language related to books, and/or both.

Textual Allusion / Intertextuality

What is it: Intertextuality is the use of other texts to build meaning in a new text. This can include the merging of texts, the retelling of an older text, rewriting texts in a modern context, borrowing parts of texts in order to comment on genre and narrative ideas, etc. A textual allusion is just a single reference to another text within the text, usually without affecting the narrative in a significant way. Textual allusions may or may not contribution to intertextuality. (See also: analogy, adaptation, appropriation, pastiche)

Examples:
  • INTERTEXTUALITY: Hag-Seed features a production of The Tempest as a way to provide parallels between the original play and its own retelling of the play. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
  • TEXTUAL ALLUSION: 8Handz plays the song Ride the Lightning by Metallica while Sal and Tony are locked into a cell. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
  • "A fever of panic against an unseen evil, as though Perth were Gotham City itself" - Jasper Jones by Craig Silvey.
Why use it:
  • Adds layers of meaning to a work of fiction - the use of a familiar reference can change the reader's perspective of either the new text or the older one, or both.
  • Can clarify meaning when discussing complicated ideas - provides a frame of reference for the reader to identify.
Quick Activity: Describe something by using a reference to a text you have read in English.

Synaesthesia

What is it: A figure of speech in which one of the five primary senses is used in the place of another. Usually used as part of a metaphor or simile as this allows for a sense to refer to something that is completely unrelated to it, such as describing abstract concepts using colours; or smell, taste or sound-based adjectives and verbs used in unexpected places.

Examples:
  • "The smell of misery, lying over everyone within like an enchantment" - Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood
  • "The words cut the air like a dagger" - The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde
  • "Taste the rainbow" - Skittles advertisement
Why use it:
  • Demonstrates creativity when communicating ideas and adds layers of meaning to a text.
  • Can reinforce a motif through describing a variety of things using vocabulary related to one particular sense.
  • Some authors can use it to create humour by surprising and deliberately confusing the reader.
Quick Activity: Use a taste to describe something unrelated to taste. Use a sound to describe something unrelated to sound. Use a colour to describe something that cannot be seen. 

Here are the three writing elements all in one sheet for ease of use:
Happy writing!

Saturday, April 17, 2021

Conversations about Hag-Seed

Epigraphs

The Advanced English Textual Conversations module provides an option to study the pairing of Shakespeare's The Tempest and Margaret Atwood's Hag-Seed. It's an accessible and popular option, and there's an ever-increasing amount of material becoming available to assist teachers and students. I usually approach the pairing by having students read The Tempest in one go, and then looking at Shakespeare's text through the lens of Hag-Seed

One of the literary structural conceits used by Atwood in her novel is the epigraph. In this context, an epigraph is the use of a quote or phrase at the beginning of a text to 'prime' the reader. This is a form of textual allusion, which is fitting when we consider that Hag-Seed itself is a giant piece of textual allusion. Atwood isn't shy in this regard, she uses not one epigraph but three.

Here's a sheet that invites students to analyse the epigraphs: The Art of the Epigraph in Hag-Seed

In this activity, students:

  • Look at what an epigraph is and how it functions.
  • Consider what each epigraph specifically says about Hag-Seed and/or why Atwood has chosen this particular quote to use. 
  • Take the intertextuality a step further by using a quote from either The Tempest or Hag-Seed as an epigraph for their own piece of writing.
Epigraphs are important for Advanced students to learn about because they exist as a higher order form of comprehension. They are a sophisticated (and potentially obscure) way for writers to experiment with abstraction, a way to distil the essence or thematic core of a piece of writing, or to even ironically write against the idea of a piece. 

Socratic Discussion

Another way of getting Advanced students to better comprehend the textual conversation between The Tempest and Hag-Seed is the use of Socratic circles. This allows for the generation of discussion about the texts without focusing too much on lower order skills like grammar and sentence construction. 

I've already written about this approach a while back if you're interested (Socratic circles) and, for the purposes of this blog entry, I've included some useful discussion questions below. I like to use these questions around the halfway mark in the module - they're intended to push quieter students into forming and voicing opinions, and can also give struggling writers an opportunity to demonstrate their advanced thinking. The beauty of Socratic discussion is in sparking a single comment from a more forthright student and then watching other students build on this or react to it. 

Anyway, here are the questions:
  • Does Prospero have the right to enslave Caliban?
  • Prospero's most prized possession is his books and he arranges to take these with him to the island, along with his daughter. What two items would you take?
  • Should Prospero have forgiven Antonio? Does he have a right to revenge?
  • Felix tells himself to 'trust the play' but then questions himself with 'but is the play trustworthy?' What do you think is meant by this?
  • Thinking of Caliban and the inmates in Hag-Seed, which is more influential - nature or nurture?
  • In what way is Miranda a product of her time?
  • Prospero was overthrown by his own brother, which is indicative of a familiar thread in Shakespeare's plays. What is this theme and is it still relevant today?
  • Who is more justified in his methods - Prospero or Felix?
  • In what way is the theme of 'performance' relevant to our everyday lives?
  • Who is 'the Other' in our society? Are they fairly represented in the media? Fairly represented in Shakespeare's time? Is Caliban a racist stereotype?
  • Would The Tempest as a play be better off without the characters of Stephano and Trinculo?
  • If Prospero were an allegory for Shakespeare himself, who would be the closest equivalent for Margaret Atwood in Hag-Seed?
  • In what way does Hag-Seed succeed in updating The Tempest for a modern day audience?
  • In what way does it fail?
  • Should any text be fair game for adaptation or sequelising? 
I've asked these questions to a range of students and it's genuinely fascinating to hear the discussions that emerge, to see the way in which conversations fold over the top of each other, and the ideas that are extended through Socratic discussion. 

They could probably even work as a writing activity for individual students who need further extension.

Monday, September 2, 2019

Advanced English: Infographics

My Year 12 Advanced English class is currently quite deep into 'revision mode'. Naturally, the students want to prepare as best they can for the upcoming HSC exams and, naturally, I want them to do this by writing as many practice responses to essay questions as possible. We're currently meeting about halfway on this and, in the spirit of preparation, I hoped to provide a useful overview that summarised some of the key concerns of the modules and the prescribed texts. 

Below you will find some graphic organisers for Common Module - Texts and Human Experiences: Nineteen Eighty-Four and Module A - Textual Conversations: The Tempest & Hag-Seed. As they're hand-drawn they aren't as flash as I'd like them to be but I think (as far as first drafts go) that they'll do the job. Apologies for the font on the Module A one - I was experimenting and I guess I won't be using that particular font again!

Download full size Nineteen Eighty-Four
Download full size The Tempest & Hag-Seed



I'm thinking I'll get the students to have a go at looking at their Craft of Writing texts in this fashion as part of their revision too.

Sunday, June 23, 2019

Textual Conversations: The Tempest & Hag-Seed


Hi students (and teachers!), here you will find materials associated with the Module B: Textual Conversations Tempest / Hag-Seed option. 
 
This was initially presented in 2019 at the Central West HSC Enrichment Seminars at Denison College, in association with Charles Sturt University. The versions linked here have been UPDATED to reflect what was presented for the Aurora College HSC Study Seminars in 2022.

This is the PPT on The Tempest / Hag-Seed.
This is the booklet of material that goes with the PPT.
And here are some additional resources on these two texts:
Happy textual conversing!

Friday, May 24, 2019

Craft of Writing: Irony and Symbolism

Hello! Our cohorts should be passingly familiar with both irony and symbolism by the time they reach Year 12 but it never hurts to revisit these keystone elements of writing, especially as students are preparing themselves to engage with the Craft of Writing module in the HSC. Below are some mini-lessons designed to support students in their consideration of writing craft. Students are shown how to use a technique, alongside examples, and then put it into practice. 

Irony

What is it: Irony occurs when words are used to indicate something opposite to their actual meaning. There are three types of irony, all of which reflect a difference between appearance and reality. These are:
  1. Verbal irony - which can take the form of sarcasm, exaggeration, contradictory phrases, or deliberate understatement.
  2. Situational irony - when an audience's expectation of something in a text is not fulfilled. Otherwise known as 'subversion'.
  3. Dramatic irony - when the audience is aware of something that some of the characters are not.
Examples:
  • Verbal Irony: "Some animals are more equal than others" - Animal Farm by George Orwell
  • Situational Irony: A woman receives a letter about her husband's death and struggles with the news. When her husband then miraculously shows up, she dies of a heart attack from the idea of not being free of him (subverting the audience's expectation that she is upset that he has died). - The Story of an Hour by Kate Chopin
  • Dramatic Irony: The audience knows right from the outset that Iago is manipulating Othello in regards to Desdemona's handkerchief, however, Othello is driven into a jealous rage at the ideas that Iago suggests as he is unaware of the truth. - Othello by William Shakespeare.
Why use it:
  • Irony brings an additional level of meaning to a situation, and calls attention to ideas through a contrast between what is said and reality.
  • Readers are forced to use their imagination to consider the full implications and underlying meanings when irony takes place.
  • Verbal irony can work effectively to create humour when used in conjunction with kairos (the right time and place).
  • Situational irony helps writers subvert reader expectations for more effective and original storytelling. It can add extra dimension and impact to the emotional connection between the reader and the text. 
  • Dramatic irony if often associated with the tragedy genre as it emphasises the fatal impact of a character misunderstanding something. Dramatic irony also assists an author in building reader engagement as it creates a tension between the reader (who knows what is happening) and their need for a character to realise what the reader already knows.
Quick Activity #1: Write a paragraph using characters from either The Tempest or Hag-Seed that demonstrates one of the three forms of irony.

Quick Activity #2: Write an explanation of which irony you used in your previous exercise and how it was demonstrated.

Quick Activity #3: Did you write about Hag-Seed or The Tempest last time? This time write a paragraph using the characters from the other, and use a form of irony that you didn't use last time.

Quick Activity #4: Write an explanation of which irony you used in your previous exercise and how it was demonstrated.  

Symbolism

What is it: The use of symbols to represent ideas or qualities. Symbolism is closely related to the human ability to think abstractly, which is what led to the creation of language. The moment humans could think of things that didn't exist in the physical world was the moment that they needed to come up with symbols to represent them. Written language is symbolism at its most basic; a series of symbols representing different sounds.

Examples:
  • "Rosebud," the final word of the ruthless entrepreneur Charles Foster Kane on his deathbed,is revealed to the bed of his childhood sled. The sled symbolises the happier childhood that he lost forever at age 8. - The film Citizen Kane directed by Orson Welles. 
  • The Golden Country, dreamt of by Winston repeatedly, symbolises the pleasant world he can never live in. - Nineteen Eighty-Four by George Orwell.
Why use it:
  • Adds depth to a text and its ideas, and demonstrates the abstract themes that 'power' the text.
  • Can allow authors to 'say' things without having to explicitly say them, which in turn allows the audience to bring their own interpretation to the text.
  • Symbolism can help the reader identify the sort of text or story they are reading, due to the associations and connotations that come with more well-known symbols (such as the generic convention of a full moon in a horror text).  
Quick Activity: Consider the masque scene in The Tempest, and the discussion in Chapter 28 of Hag-Seed where different ways of staging it are discussed. In what way (different to those discussed) would you stage it? Justify how your version would symbolise one or two themes from the text.  
 
Here are these two writing elements on the one sheet for ease of use:
Happy writing!

Wednesday, May 15, 2019

Craft of Writing: Brachyology, Shared Lines, and Congery


Hello! Here are three more Craft of Writing mini-lessons designed to support students in practising writing craft all year-round. As mentioned in previous blogs on other writing elements - here, here, here, here, and here - this approach involves covering a writing technique in a ten minute segment at the start of each lesson. Students are shown how to use a technique, alongside examples, and then put it into practice.

Brachyology / Brachylogia

What is it: A form of condensed writing or speech where a longer form of expression, be it a noun group or a figure of speech, is reduced to a much shorter version.

Examples:
  • "They'll relate to it well. The Ministers. Guaranteed." - Felix in Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood
  • Black: "How many would you say you read?" / White: "I've no idea" / Black: "Ball park" - The Sunset Limited by Cormac McCarthy.
Why use it: 
  • Allows the speaker or writer to express things concisely; could denote that the speaker is working in a time-sensitive scenario.
  • Representative of characters that are laconic (laid-back / chill) or characters with a high-constructed way of speaking.
  • Also links to youth culture and the forging of new lexicons representative of new ideas, new ways of thinking.
Quick Activity: Write an internal dialogue of a character thinking through how they will perform the role of Caliban. Ensure that you include an example of brachyology to convey the actor's state of mind as they get into character.

Shared Lines

What is it: A generic convention of Shakespearean drama is to format the lines of dialogue in a way that directs the actors in how to perform them in quick succession. This is reliant on iambic pentameter, with the arrangements of shorter lines of dialogue making up the full amount of iambs.

Example:
PROSPERO: I will tell no tales.
SEBASTIAN:                            The devil speaks in him!
PROSPERO:                                                                      No.
(From The Tempest by William Shakespeare)

Why use it:
  • Even though the characters are interacting and conversing with shorter lines of dialogue, the use of shared lines allows for the playwright to maintain the rhythm and poetry of blank verse.
  • The formatting of shared lines assists actors in performing against and off each other's dialogue, IE. Knowing when to speak, and how quickly to speak.
  • Can establish a comical interchange, or convey a confused tone due to many characters speaking almost at once.
Quick Activity: In a group of 2 or 3, create a sequence of dialogue about imprisonment. Used shared lines and then perform it.

Congery

What is it: A rhetorical device in which multiple words are used to convey the same idea or meaning. Congery is related to the technique 'tautology', in which two words that mean the same thing are unnecessarily used together.
Examples: (all from Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
  • "How he has fallen. How deflated. How reduced."
  • "Ejected! Tumbled out! Discarded!"
  • "When you walk in here, you shed your daily self. You become a clean slate. Then you draw on a new face."
Why use it:
  • Can be used to emphasise a point by revisiting the same idea in multiple ways.
  • Helps to effectively build characterisation through the establishment of a specific kind of voice or vocal inflection used in everyday conversation.
  • Features as a persuasive device; the repetition of a point through the use of wide vocabulary is designed to appeal to a wide audience - IE. If one articulation of the idea doesn't make its impact on one particular person, then another version might.
Quick Activity: Write a short argument, using congery, that expresses your feelings (positive or negative) about a food.

Here are these three writing elements all in the one sheet for ease of use:
Happy writing!

Friday, April 26, 2019

Craft of Writing: Modality, Pathetic Fallacy, and Iambic Pentameter


Hello! Here are another three Craft of Writing mini-lessons designed to support students in practising writing craft all year-round. As mentioned in previous blogs on other writing elements - here, here, here, and here - this approach involves covering a writing technique in a ten minute segment at the start of each lesson. Students are shown how to use a technique, alongside examples, and then put it into practice. 

Modality

What is it: A choice of words indicating how definite the writer/speaker is about something. High modality language is certain and definite, whereas low modality makes the author sound unsure about their subject.

Examples:
  • "'We need Duncan to make the call.' I guess that's what he says. There's much noise" - Lullaby, Chuck Palahniuk
  • "Historians have always written their work in narrative form" - The Killing of History, Keith Windschuttle
Why use it:
  • High modality language is used to persuade the audience to agree with a point of view, or for purposes of characterisation.
  • Low modality language can lull the reader into a false sense of security, or to create a kind of character.
Quick Activity:
  1. Use high or low modality to write 2-3 sentences describing a fictional politician.
  2. Swap with the person next to you. Rewrite their sequence in the opposite modality.
Pathetic Fallacy

What is it: A kind of figurative device that highlights the relationship between a character or author's emotional state with the world around them. Most commonly represented through the weather acting as a symbol for a character's feelings. The term 'pathetic' is used here because it relates to pathos (using emotions to persuade).

Examples:
  • "Some say the Earth was feverous and did shake" - an Old Man in William Shakespeare's Macbeth describes the strange weather that occurred during King Duncan's death.
  • "The white cold virgin snow upon my heart / abates the ardour of my liver" - Ferdinand in The Tempest, William Shakespeare.
Why use it:
  • In Shakespeare terms, nature and the weather were seen as reflections of God's feelings or a way for God to communicate with the world. As the King was seen as God's representative on Earth, this meant that the weather was closely tied to the King's wellbeing. 
  • By externalising emotions in this way (or using these kinds of comparisons), writers are able to deepen the reader's understanding of abstract feelings.
  • Offers a unique perspective on familiar feelings. 
Quick Activity: In regards to Shakespeare's The Tempest, use pathetic fallacy to describe the emotional state of Caliban, Miranda or Prospero.

Iambic Pentameter

What is it: A form of writing presented as 'blank verse' (unrhymed poetry). Each line is made up of five (the pentameter) double-syllable units (the iambs). More technically, the iambs are made up of one short syllable followed by a longer 'stressed' syllable. The stresses direct how each line is spoken by the performer.

Examples:
  • "Dull thin, I say so: he, that Caliban / Whom now I keep in service. Thou best know'st" - Prospero in The Tempest, William Shakespeare
  • "Faith, sir, you need not fear. When we were boys, / Who would believe that there were mountaineers" - Gonzalo in The Tempest, William Shakespeare
  • "These tags I'll pop, and boast in rhyming verse / That what I wear puts swagger in my gait; / Though twenty shillings have I in my purse, / My self-esteem and manhood both inflate" - Shakespearean version of Thrift Shop by Macklemore, found on that most magical of places: the Internet.
Why use it:
  • The Elizabethans used this precise and consciously rhythmic form of writing in their poetry to represent the grand and highly educated nature of the nobility.
  • Allows the writer to shape the pace and intonation of the actor or performer reading their verse.
  • Believed to give dialogue a natural and poetic sense of rhythm due to the way the iambs mirror the beat of the human heart.  
Quick Activity: Go back to a previous paragraph you have written for one of these activities and convert it into four lines of iambic pentameter.  

Here are these three writing elements all in the one sheet for ease of use:
Happy writing!

(Picture sourced from East Riding Theatre Twitter feed. Not sure who drew it!)

Saturday, March 9, 2019

Craft of Writing: Personification & Semicolon

In the last Craft of Writing post we looked at a mini-lesson focusing on hyperbaton. In support of an integrated approach to Module C, this entry outlines two further examples of writing craft that students can examine and hopefully use in their own writing alongside the previously mentioned rhetorical device. 

In Term 3 my class will be looking at the modes of writing mentioned in Module C's rubric, however, before we get to that point I'm hoping the students will pick up a few ideas that activate a deeper level of thinking when constructing language. Taking a few minutes at the start of each lesson with these mini-lessons represents an attempt to address a greater sense of student independence when writing.

Personification

What is it: A metaphorical figure of speech in which an idea, object or something else inanimate is given human attributes, or treated like a human character by the author of a text.

Examples: (All from Shakespeare's The Tempest, in support of Module A: Textual Conversations)
  • "Time / goes upright with his carriage"
  • "Patience / says it is past her cure"
  • "Though the seas threaten, they are merciful"
Why use it:
  • Allows for an elaboration on the nature of a abstract quality by comparing aspects of it with human behaviour or qualities.
  • Adds increased meaning and depth to expressions.
  • It allows us to reposition things from a human perspective to increase our understanding and develop a connection.
Quick Activity:
Think of an abstract quality (EG. Love, Truth, Death, Time, Hate, Anxiety) and use personification to illustrate a character's relationship with this quality.

Semicolon

What is it: A punctuation mark that allows for two related clauses to exist in the same sentences without a conjunction or connective word. Some clauses are closely related enough that they should be in the same sentence and the reader's understanding of one is improved by the other; this can sometimes rely on the use of a semicolon to work.

Examples:
  • "There would be no one to live for during those coming years; she would live for herself" - The Awakening, Kate Chopin
  • "Harry had never been inside Filch's office before; it was a place most students avoided" - Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets, J.K. Rowling
Why use it:
  • To connect an explanation to something mentioned in the previous clause.
  • Used as a 'soft' full stop - showing that two sentences have a closer relationship than they would with a full stop.
  • Two independent clauses in a compound sentence are typically joined by a connecrive term such as 'and', 'or', 'but', etc. A semicolon can sometimes take their place.
  • Can be used completely differently as a 'super-comma' if commas are being used in a sentence for smaller separate items alongside larger ones, EG. "The tall, barky trees; the roaring, blood-crazed bears; and the rivers that had burst their muddy banks." 
Quick Activity: Write a paragraph in which describe the recipe for a meal. Ensure that you correctly include a semicolon. 

Here are both of these writing elements alongside hyperbaton on a sheet for student use:
Happy writing!

Sunday, March 3, 2019

Hag-Seed: Textual Conversations with The Tempest

I'm about mid-way through teaching Module A: Textual Conversations to Year 12 Advanced English and, in light of its newness, it's pretty much a case of so-far, so-good. A little while ago I put up an annotated Tempest as a starting point for the module but I'm acutely aware that this only approximately accounts for half of what students need to cover in having their 'textual conversations'. Without replicating the entire text like what has been done with The Tempest above, annotating a novel can be a little more challenging. 

Margaret Atwood's Hag-Seed is a wonderfully layered and highly accessible text that both remakes and comments on Shakespeare's The Tempest. The document below works as both a series of annotations and a study guide for students who are looking to draw connections between Hag-Seed and its progenitor. In said document:
  • The first column covers quotes and examples from Hag-Seed
  • The second column identifies techniques used by Atwood in relation to the example, allowing for students to build metalanguage and/or analyse authorial purpose and effective construction of language.
  • The third column directs the reader to make comparisons or recognise the significance of the example in relation to the module. 
I've included some questions for students outlined in bold; about a couple per page in the third column. I've told my class that, in revising Hag-Seed as the HSC approaches, that they should aim to work their way through this study guide's questions throughout the remainder of the school year.

Anyway, here it is: Hag-Seed Study Guide.

Disclaimer: please excuse any typos or mistakes, it's a first draft. I'll revise it again when I teach it a second time.

Saturday, February 23, 2019

Craft of Writing: Hyperbaton


Hi there! Here's another mini-lesson to support an integrated approach to Module C: Craft of Writing, this time focusing on the literary device of hyperbaton. 

Hyperbaton

What is it: Meaning to 'transpose', hyperbaton refers to the rearrangement of words into the less expected order. Writers move words around or reverse the clauses in a sentence.

Examples:
  • "When nine hundred years old you reach, look as good you will not" - Return of the Jedi, directed by George Lucas.
  • "As you from crimes would pardoned be, / Let your indulgence set me free" - The Tempest, William Shakespeare
Why use it:
  • Can deliberately startle or confuse the reader, forcing them to consciously reorder the words and build the meaning in their own head.
  • Used in poetry to reorder the words so that rhyme and rhythm can be maintained.
  • Refocuses the reader on specific phrases and words.
  • Can be symbolic in upsetting the expected order of things.
  • In the right hands it can add a sense of literary weight.   
Quick Activity:
Create a conversation between two characters in which one uses hyperbaton. Consider the kind of person this would be and describe them. 

Saturday, February 16, 2019

The Tempest Annotated

Hello!

One of the challenges of tackling Shakespeare in the English classroom is finding the time to have your students read it. Assigning the text as a reading will work for some students but, owing to the nature of drama itself as a narrative genre best experienced live, this isn't going to work for the majority of the class. 

Ideally, you would have your students watch the play but this also isn't always practical. And, when we get to Year 11 and 12, the idea of setting aside entire periods to read through Shakespeare inspires a special kind of anxiety related to covering course content, outcomes, unpacking metalanguage, etc., ad nauseum, whatevs. 

There's also that kid in each class who also tells you that they've read the text, honest guv'nor, and then will write a paragraph about the way Prospero takes revenge by tricking Othello into feeling jealous towards his mother Gertrude. You want to snap, "You aint read nuthin'!" but the calm veneer of professionalism instead has it emerge as a polite "Hmmm, not quite."

The structuring of the new Advanced English syllabus now means, for better or worse, that a lot of us will be teaching Shakespeare through The Tempest as part of Module A: Textual Conversations. This means that there is also a novel to read alongside it, Margaret Atwood's vibrantly metatextual Hag-Seed, which adds an extra dimension to the logistics of fitting the module into the space of approximately 10 weeks. 

Something that seems to have worked with my current class was squeezing the reading of The Tempest into the end of the previous term. The best approach I've found for doing Shakespeare with Year 12 is to have the play read in one big go. In the past I've run this on a Saturday or on a day in the school holidays but, as my students had schedules that didn't fit with this at the end of last year, I organised it as an incursion on the next-to-last day of the term instead. With one of the less-used rooms in the school booked, we met as a class first thing in the morning with some breakfast, assigned roles, and read the text all the way through with a 20 minute intermission break. This approximately took us about 3 or 3.5 hours and now the entire class can say that they've read the entire text. And, most importantly, I believe them!


Even Advanced English students will have a varied response to the idea of reading Shakespeare - not all of them are fans. Some level of support therefore needs to be supplied in helping to translate the language while they read. I don't think we should have them initially read the No Fear version (as helpful as this can be as a supplementary study text) as it's important that Advanced students engage with Shakespeare's language to gain a complete understanding of how the text is constructed. 

Luckily Shakespeare is well beyond the constraints of copyright law, so there was nothing stopping me from creating a new edition of the text that would include annotations in support of our context. The link below includes an unabridged presentation of The Tempest with a series of annotations alongside the original text. 


Hopefully this helps get the students through the play, which is imperative as a base level of engagement before they read Atwood's novel. Students can come back to this version throughout the module to analyse examples and tie them to Hag-Seed.

Monday, January 7, 2019

Ars Poetica

             Portrait of the poet Eileen Chong
I am, admittedly, a late bloomer when it comes to appreciation of poetry. 

In my first prac as a student teacher I remarked to my supervisor that I wasn't much into poetry. She told me, in good humour, that I needed to get my act together. Grasping for some kind of validation, I told her a few days later that I'd picked up a bargain copy of a Pam Ayres volume. She was less than impressed and I was confused. I was fairly green when it came to the idea of a poetry canon; I'd read Coleridge at school some 15 years previously and all I could remember was that he smoked a bunch of heroin and wrote the poem that inspired the classic Iron Maiden song Rime of the Ancient Mariner. 

It's been ten years since my practicum block and it feels like a lifetime ago.

I have had some time to read a bunch of poems since those days and the construction of effective poetry appeals to me a lot more now that I'm in my (late) 30s. I used to play in bands, write song lyrics, and have always loved a neat turn of phrase. Finding my way into poetry has been both a joy and a sadness. So far, the poets I've liked are:
  • Ellen Van Neerven
  • W.H. Auden
  • Eileen Chong
  • Dylan Thomas
  • Tracy K. Smith
  • Olivia Gatwood
  • Kim Boey Cheng
  • Anita Heiss
  • Percy Mumbulla
  • Oodgeroo Noonuccal
I find myself listening to singer-songwriters with a much more critical ear now too; Paul Kelly, Brian Sella, Francis Quinlan, Ted Leo, Wil Wagner - they're all pulling words from the ether to craft stories as song, and I find myself scanning them for swearwords to check if I can use them for junior English classes. 

I didn't post anything to this blog for December and as I'm currently working on some other writing projects I'm thinking my online output will probably slow down a little. So I wanted to post something... I wanted to put down some thoughts regarding 'Ars Poetica' too, and this seems as good an excuse as any to write something.  

'Ars Poetica' is a poem by the classical Roman poet Horace that offers advice on how to write poetry. The phrase 'Ars Poetica' (meaning 'the art of poetry') has become an emblematic term used to describe a metatextual work in which an author reflects on the why and how of literary creation.

I hadn't really heard of this term until about a year ago but, hey, I'm only about 2036 years late. Isn't that the way, though? That you hear or read a term like this and then suddenly you see it everywhere. I was reading The Tempest and doing some paratextual research and this is exactly what happened. In the midst of reading about John Dee's career as a spy, the doomed Virginian colony, and whether the Jacobeans were aware of their king's homosexuality or not, I came across W.H. Auden's 'The Sea and the Mirror'. This long, complicated, multi-perspective text features a series of interconnected poems in which the various characters of The Tempest talk to one another and the audience. Auden referred to it as his ars poetica, with the text acting as his own personal commentary about how we view art. In extension of this, Auden posited that The Tempest itself was Shakespeare's ars poetica.

Looking at Prospero's enigmatic epilogue, in which the magician implores directly for the audience to set him free, it's easy to see why so many academics have imagined an ailing Shakespeare speaking through the character. Whether this is really the case or not we will probably never know, but I can appreciate the romance and poetry of the Bard reaching the end of his career and wanting to create a final statement on his work in the theatre.

The Tempest as ars poetica is further supported by the play's thematic core as a narrative built around the motif of performance. Prospero 'performs' for his daughter, Miranda, by keeping certain facts from her. He uses metaphors relating to the stage to refer to his elaborate plans of manipulation and revenge. Ariel and the other spirits put on a masque as a symbol of Ferdinand and Miranda's union. The idea of performance is one of several keys to understanding the text on a deeper level.

Of course, the other side of this sentimental coin is that Shakespeare had no idea when he was going to die. The only real record of his cause of death is a possibly apocryphal tale told 50 years later that attributes Shakespeare's passing to a fever contracted after a wild drinking session. If this is even remotely true then it would make no sense to assume that he wrote The Tempest knowing it would be his last play. Any intention for it to serve as his ars poetica wouldn't be tied to his supposed retirement or demise.

Anyway. 


I've also been analysing Eileen Chong's Burning Rice collection in connection to the English Extension 1 Elective 'Literary Homelands' and pulling together any relevant paratext I can find that will support student parsing of her work. During this process I found the poem 'Burning Rice' referred to as Chong's ars poetica.

There's that phrase again.

The poem itself is a three stanza piece about memory, ancestry, and the preparation of rice. These fifteen short lines are so carefully poised and constructed, so central to Chong's writing in the rest of the volume, so metatextually ripe as a metaphor for creation, that they can indeed be seen as definitively representative of what her poetry is essentially about.

It's interesting and I can see Extension students, with further discussion of what ars poetica means, attempting to find examples of texts from other writers that metatextually represent what they do, how they do it, and why they do it.