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Thursday, August 19, 2021

Craft of Writing: Motif, Intertextuality, and Synaesthesia

Hi there! Below you will find three Craft of Writing mini-lessons that support students in practising their writing craft all year-round. You can find a range of other Craft of Writing resources here. The mini-lesson approach involves examining a writing technique in a ten minute segment at the start of each lesson - students are shown how to use the technique, alongside contextual examples, and then asked to put it into practice.

Motif

What is it: An image, sound, action, idea, phrase, word or anything else that repeatedly occurs throughout a text. This is used as a form of symbolism suggestive of a theme or message that the author wants to convey. (See also: symbolism, generic conventions)

Examples:

  • The appearance of straight lines and harsh geometric shapes whenever the rabbit characters are seen in the picture book The Rabbits, which is suggestive of their association with artificial human-made structures. (The Rabbits by John Marsden and Shaun Tan)
  • The repeated references to performance and terms associated with it in Prospero's speeches. (The Tempest by William Shakespeare)
  • Felix's recurring use of metaphorical language associated with magic. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
Why use it:
  • Reinforces the thematic core of a text and helps a writer convey their thesis.
  • Creates another level of communication in the text that can allow some readers to pick up on ideas that they might normally not pick up on.
  • Contributes to a sense of mood or atmosphere in the text. Can reinforce setting with motifs associated with specific generic conventions.
Quick Activity: Accepting that a book is a symbol of knowledge, write a paragraph about an intelligent character washed up on an island that uses this symbol as a motif. It can be the literal inclusion of a book, language related to books, and/or both.

Textual Allusion / Intertextuality

What is it: Intertextuality is the use of other texts to build meaning in a new text. This can include the merging of texts, the retelling of an older text, rewriting texts in a modern context, borrowing parts of texts in order to comment on genre and narrative ideas, etc. A textual allusion is just a single reference to another text within the text, usually without affecting the narrative in a significant way. Textual allusions may or may not contribution to intertextuality. (See also: analogy, adaptation, appropriation, pastiche)

Examples:
  • INTERTEXTUALITY: Hag-Seed features a production of The Tempest as a way to provide parallels between the original play and its own retelling of the play. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
  • TEXTUAL ALLUSION: 8Handz plays the song Ride the Lightning by Metallica while Sal and Tony are locked into a cell. (Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood)
  • "A fever of panic against an unseen evil, as though Perth were Gotham City itself" - Jasper Jones by Craig Silvey.
Why use it:
  • Adds layers of meaning to a work of fiction - the use of a familiar reference can change the reader's perspective of either the new text or the older one, or both.
  • Can clarify meaning when discussing complicated ideas - provides a frame of reference for the reader to identify.
Quick Activity: Describe something by using a reference to a text you have read in English.

Synaesthesia

What is it: A figure of speech in which one of the five primary senses is used in the place of another. Usually used as part of a metaphor or simile as this allows for a sense to refer to something that is completely unrelated to it, such as describing abstract concepts using colours; or smell, taste or sound-based adjectives and verbs used in unexpected places.

Examples:
  • "The smell of misery, lying over everyone within like an enchantment" - Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood
  • "The words cut the air like a dagger" - The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde
  • "Taste the rainbow" - Skittles advertisement
Why use it:
  • Demonstrates creativity when communicating ideas and adds layers of meaning to a text.
  • Can reinforce a motif through describing a variety of things using vocabulary related to one particular sense.
  • Some authors can use it to create humour by surprising and deliberately confusing the reader.
Quick Activity: Use a taste to describe something unrelated to taste. Use a sound to describe something unrelated to sound. Use a colour to describe something that cannot be seen. 

Here are the three writing elements all in one sheet for ease of use:
Happy writing!

Saturday, April 17, 2021

Conversations about Hag-Seed

Epigraphs

The Advanced English Textual Conversations module provides an option to study the pairing of Shakespeare's The Tempest and Margaret Atwood's Hag-Seed. It's an accessible and popular option, and there's an ever-increasing amount of material becoming available to assist teachers and students. I usually approach the pairing by having students read The Tempest in one go, and then looking at Shakespeare's text through the lens of Hag-Seed

One of the literary structural conceits used by Atwood in her novel is the epigraph. In this context, an epigraph is the use of a quote or phrase at the beginning of a text to 'prime' the reader. This is a form of textual allusion, which is fitting when we consider that Hag-Seed itself is a giant piece of textual allusion. Atwood isn't shy in this regard, she uses not one epigraph but three.

Here's a sheet that invites students to analyse the epigraphs: The Art of the Epigraph in Hag-Seed

In this activity, students:

  • Look at what an epigraph is and how it functions.
  • Consider what each epigraph specifically says about Hag-Seed and/or why Atwood has chosen this particular quote to use. 
  • Take the intertextuality a step further by using a quote from either The Tempest or Hag-Seed as an epigraph for their own piece of writing.
Epigraphs are important for Advanced students to learn about because they exist as a higher order form of comprehension. They are a sophisticated (and potentially obscure) way for writers to experiment with abstraction, a way to distil the essence or thematic core of a piece of writing, or to even ironically write against the idea of a piece. 

Socratic Discussion

Another way of getting Advanced students to better comprehend the textual conversation between The Tempest and Hag-Seed is the use of Socratic circles. This allows for the generation of discussion about the texts without focusing too much on lower order skills like grammar and sentence construction. 

I've already written about this approach a while back if you're interested (Socratic circles) and, for the purposes of this blog entry, I've included some useful discussion questions below. I like to use these questions around the halfway mark in the module - they're intended to push quieter students into forming and voicing opinions, and can also give struggling writers an opportunity to demonstrate their advanced thinking. The beauty of Socratic discussion is in sparking a single comment from a more forthright student and then watching other students build on this or react to it. 

Anyway, here are the questions:
  • Does Prospero have the right to enslave Caliban?
  • Prospero's most prized possession is his books and he arranges to take these with him to the island, along with his daughter. What two items would you take?
  • Should Prospero have forgiven Antonio? Does he have a right to revenge?
  • Felix tells himself to 'trust the play' but then questions himself with 'but is the play trustworthy?' What do you think is meant by this?
  • Thinking of Caliban and the inmates in Hag-Seed, which is more influential - nature or nurture?
  • In what way is Miranda a product of her time?
  • Prospero was overthrown by his own brother, which is indicative of a familiar thread in Shakespeare's plays. What is this theme and is it still relevant today?
  • Who is more justified in his methods - Prospero or Felix?
  • In what way is the theme of 'performance' relevant to our everyday lives?
  • Who is 'the Other' in our society? Are they fairly represented in the media? Fairly represented in Shakespeare's time? Is Caliban a racist stereotype?
  • Would The Tempest as a play be better off without the characters of Stephano and Trinculo?
  • If Prospero were an allegory for Shakespeare himself, who would be the closest equivalent for Margaret Atwood in Hag-Seed?
  • In what way does Hag-Seed succeed in updating The Tempest for a modern day audience?
  • In what way does it fail?
  • Should any text be fair game for adaptation or sequelising? 
I've asked these questions to a range of students and it's genuinely fascinating to hear the discussions that emerge, to see the way in which conversations fold over the top of each other, and the ideas that are extended through Socratic discussion. 

They could probably even work as a writing activity for individual students who need further extension.

Saturday, August 8, 2020

Advanced Module A: Textual Conversations


Unlike other electives and modules in the Year 12 syllabus, the Prescribed Texts in Textual Conversations aren't organised in order of text type. This is due to the intertextual theme of the module, which can take a variety of forms and combines text types in different ways. A breakdown of these is as follows:
  • 4 novels, 3 plays (2 of which are Shakespeare), 3 films, and 4 suites of poetry.
  • 9 male composers, 5 female.
  • 6 English composers, 3 American, 1 French, 1 Moroccan, 1 New Zealander, and 1 Canadian.
  • 1 written in the 16th century, 2 in the 17th century, 1 in the 1920s, 1 in the 1940s, 1 in the 1960s, 2 in the 1990s, 2 in the 2000s, 2 in the 2010s.
  • Pairs are as follows: 1 play and film, 1 book and film, 1 book and book, 1 poetry and play, 1 poetry and film, 1 poetry and poetry, 1 play and book.
Richard III by William Shakespeare and Looking for Richard, directed by Al Pacino
What are they: Richard III chronicles the rise of King Richard III as he schemes and manipulates his way to the crown by having just about everyone in his family murdered. As a character piece, it's a fascinating look into the supposed mind of one of the England's most reviled monarchs, and a meditation on the means employed by despotic rulers to shape events around them. The 1990s documentary Looking for Richard works on two levels (three, if you also look it as an ego-project for Al Pacino in his personal quest for greatness); as a performance of the play by American actors and also as a 'behind-the-scenes' look at what makes the play and Shakespeare so enduringly significant.

Scope for Study: Arguably the most commonly studied of Shakespeare's 'History' plays, Richard III works best as a look into what makes a psychopathic would-be tyrant like Richard tick. If students can look past the cast of more than sixty characters, they'll find enough to talk about in regard to Richard's Machiavellian pursuit of power and the concept of a man entertained by the game of evil perhaps moreso than the ends it achieves. Al Pacino's documentary works as a living, breathing study guide to go alongside the play - with Pacino himself unpacking key scenes, character motivations, and the changing context of the play when performed in the 20th century and for overseas audiences such as those in America. 

NESA Annotations: Annotations for these paired texts can be found in the 2009-14 Annotations document from when they were included as part of the Exploring Connections elective. Note is made of Pacino 'celebrating hybridity of form' and the 'complex processes involved in the negotiation between Shakespearean text and performance', as well as the three 'narrative strands' of Looking for Richard - the story of Richard III, the story of the play's historical context, and story of Pacino adapting Richard III.

Verdict: The villainous Richard is a fascinating Shakespearean creation but, as I alluded to earlier, there are a lot of characters in this play so I'm personally a little unsure of how the complicated medieval politics would translate with a class (keen to hear how teachers approach this one as I haven't taught it before). By contrast, Looking for Richard is a relatively straightforward text, even if it does come across as a glorified DVD extra rather than as a film in its own right. Pacino is kind of pretentious throughout and I don't think he achieves what he sets out to do (IE. Make Shakespeare accessible for modern audiences in a new way) - the film poster featured here is a prime example of this, just look at that goofy picture of Pacino standing like Bart Simpson in front of a larger picture of himself. Makes me cringe. 


Mrs Dalloway by Virgina Woolf and The Hours, directed by Stephen Daldry
What are they: The titular protagonist of Mrs Dalloway plans for a party in which the who's who of post-WWI London will be in attendance. She goes about her day, contemplating her past and the possibilities and regrets of a missed romance with her close friend Peter Walsh, and crosses paths briefly with Septimus Warren Smith, a man experiencing 'shell shock' as a result of his experiences in the war. The film The Hours revisits the subtexts of Woolf's novel in multiple, interconnected ways - exploring Woolf's own mental illness during the germination of her groundbreaking novel, the experience of a dissatisfied housewife in the 1950s as she contemplates suicide while reading the novel, and the contemporary relationship between a bisexual woman and her friend - a poet dying from AIDS.

Scope for Study: There's a lot to unpack in Mrs Dalloway. If you'll excuse the anachronism, it's essentially the literary equivalent of a single-shot film. Readers are dropped into the protagonist's life without context and left to figure things out as the narrative slowly moves forward. Students will need to examine the way that the novel is filtered to us through a series of exploratory stream-of-consciousness devices that blur the line between limited and omniscient third person perspectives, and the way that Woolf fugues between direct and indirect speech in order to 'blow up' the miniscule details of each moment. In comparing the novel to The Hours, students will be able to examine the wider context of Woolf's life in creating Mrs Dalloway and the way that its legacy is depicted on the screen across three different time periods (1923, 1951, 2001). The multiple time periods also allow for students to examine changing attitudes to suicide, mental health, and sexuality - all of which feature at different levels in Mrs Dalloway and The Hours.

NESA Annotations: Notes can be found in the 2015-20 Annotations, where these texts are both discussed within the framework of Advanced Module A: Comparative Study of Texts (from the last syllabus). The Hours is highlighted as an exploration of a single day in the lives of each of its characters, thus drawing parallels with Woolf's novel. Further similarities are identified through the way in which both texts examine the lives of women in varying social and cultural contexts, the way in which the past informs the present lives of these characters, and Daldry's postmodernist use of structure to add to Woolf's themes and ideas.

Verdict: I can see the merit of studying Mrs Dalloway but I struggle to imagine it 'landing' with some students - indeed, it would take a keen Advanced class to rise to the particular challenge offered by this pair of texts. Woolf's writing style is... well, it's something. There are so many semicolons, and the added dimension of the text as an exploration of post-fin de siecle Europe only serves to illustrate just how truly dense a work it is. The Hours, by contrast, is a fine film with a lot to say, and the way it handles its multiple plots - while non-linear - is relatively accessible for most viewers. There is definitely a textual conversation between the film and Woolf's book that would provide a lot of material for discussion, but I think it would need passion and hard work in order to do it justice. I could provide the latter, but I'm not confident in delivering the former.

The Stranger by Albert Camus and The Meursault Investigation by Kamel Daoud
What are they: In The Stranger, Meursault, an average French-Algerian colonial of little note, recounts the immediate events leading up to his decision to shoot an Arab dead on a beach. He tells his story dispassionately, seeming not to care that his mother has just died or that his girlfriend Marie is in love with him, and then also recounts the resultant court case in which he is judged more for his oddly nondescript nature than for the fact that he has murdered someone. Many years later, in The Meursault Investigation, the reader is given a view of the same events through the eyes of Harun, the brother of the murdered Arab. Harun recounts the events of his life after the untimely death of Musa (unnamed in Camus' novel) to an unseen listener, recounting the impact of this senseless act of violence upon his mother and how this in turn shaped his own life during Algeria's tumultuous decolonisation period. Harun's life echoes that of Meursault's in a multitude of ironic and deliberate ways.

Scope for Study: Daoud's text works on multiple levels by coming at Camus' famous postmodernist narrative in seemingly contradictory ways - as both an 'in-universe' sequel about the brother of Meursault's victim, and as a metatextual deconstruction of The Stranger's inherent colonialism. There is a wealth of material in The Meursault Investigation that can be spun into a whole range of discussions in relation to Module A's descriptor. Angles include: a comparison of the protagonists within both texts and their relationships with their respective mothers, Daoud's use of a second person point of view and how this disrupts notions of the novel as an easily defined commentary on The Stranger, and Harun as a metonym for the decolonised Algeria. My favourite approach, however, would perhaps be the idea of viewing Harun's narrative as a postmodern erasure of Camus' profundity - a deserved intellectual bathos delivered by the subaltern. 

NESA Annotations: As one of the newer pairings in the Prescribed Texts, notes for The Stranger and The Meursault Investigation can be found in in the 2019-2023 Annotations document. Surprisingly, these annotations focus predominantly on the intellectual weight of The Stranger, with only one of the last five dot points of analysis even mentioning The Meursault Investigation (and, even then, the 'suggested opportunities' are fairly general and non-specific).  

Verdict: I got a lot out of reading this pair of novels over the course of just four days. The way Daoud's sequel envelopes and enfolds The Stranger is a breathtaking tour-de-force - and that's no mean feat when we consider the influence and significance of Camus' novel. I think teaching this as a Textual Conversations study would certainly be challenging but, if the class was up to the challenge and open to the contextual grounding that would be necessary, it would no doubt be a rewarding experience for both the students and the teacher.

A Selection of His Poetry by John Donne and W;t by Margaret Edson
John Donne poetry
  • The Sunne Rising
  • The Apparition
  • A Valediction: forbidding mourning
  • This is my playes last scene
  • At the round earths imagin'd corners
  • If poysonous mineralls
  • Death be not proud
  • Hymne to God my God, in my sicknesse
What are they: John Donne, a contemporary of Shakespeare, wrote sonnets and other forms of poetry in the metaphysical mode and has been widely recognised as one of the key Baroque poets, who were known for an increased examination of the abstract. The poetry prescribed here explores love, death, and man's relationship with his maker when faced with these concepts. Margaret Edson's W;t is a one act play in which a dying literature professor named Vivian reflects on her life's devotion to Donne's poetry and the legacy of this single-mindedness as she approaches a painful death without human consolation. 

Scope for Study: Donne's poetry is highly metaphorical but also relatively accessible if students are walked through it carefully. The religious context of the poet will need some unpacking in order to reveal the depths of his various 'conversations' with God and the reader, and students will also be able to draw parallels to modern ideas of love and death in their own culture. Edson's play goes some way towards unpacking some of the selected pieces, specifically 'Death be Not Proud' and 'If Poysonous Mineralls', and adds further depth to the themes therein. In engaging with W;t, however, students will be able to look at larger questions relating to the meaning of life and the value we ascribe to the arts and their purpose. 

NESA Annotations: Annotations can be found in the 2009-2014 document, when W;t and Donne's poetry were part of the Advanced English Comparative Study elective Exploring Connections. Emphasis is placed on the way that both texts explore "challenging issues without providing definitive answers", specifically in relation to the nature of death. Mention is also made of the binary opposition between the emotional and the intellectual and how each text explores this opposition.

Verdict: I love Donne's poetry and think there's a lot of material within each poem that can be connected to the personal context of the student. I think an engaging lesson could be spent in particular on letting students lead discussion on 'The Apparition' in connection to notions of gender. Margaret Edson's play is a highly valuable flipside to Donne's conversation as critical analysis can reveal certain dichotomies at play - Edson and her protagonist both provide a feminine point of view and, unlike Donne, Vivien has rejected the pursuit of love altogether. There are also several other rich parallels that bear examination, such as Vivien's relationship with Donne vs. Donne's relationship with God. 


The Complete Poems by John Keats and Bright Star, directed by Jane Campion
John Keats poetry
  • La Belle Dame sans Merci
  • To Autumn
  • Bright star! would that I were steadfast as thou art
  • Ode to a Nightingale
  • Ode on a Grecian Urn
  • When I have fears that I may cease to be
  • The Eve of St Agnes, XXIII
What are they: Keats, one of the key English poets of the early 19th century, embodied the intense emotional pathos of the Romantic movement and its obsessions. 'The Eve of St Agnes' is the epic of the selected suite of poems - longer than all the other poems put together, it tells a long-form narrative of secret lovers via a prism of Scottish/English folklore. Other poems reflect Keats' intensity in regard to love ('La Belle Dame sans Merci', 'Bright Star'), nature ('To Autumn') and death ('When I have fears that I may cease to be', 'Ode to a Nightingale'). The film Bright Star depicts the life of Keats during the writing of these poems, his creative struggles and love for Fanny Brawne, and his tragically untimely death.

Scope for Study: Students would perhaps benefit from starting with the film first rather than the poetry. Watching Bright Star would provide a strong contextual framework for Keats' poetry, as well as a 'way in' for many of the prescribed poems. Jane Campion's script and direction do a fine job of drawing out a 'thesis' from the work of Keats, synthesising key themes and presenting them in a more easily accessible and visual manner. Students might consider that poetry in the early 19th century existed as part of an aural culture, that there wasn't an assumption that people would automatically understand Keats' poetry, and the precarious balance between love and distraction that Keats drew upon as inspiration for his work. Each of these ideas exist as key components of Campion's film and will support the ability of students to engage with the suite of poetry in a variety of ways.

NESA Annotations: There are notes on Bright Star in the 2015-2020 Annotations document from when it was included as part of the Module B Texts and Ways of Thinking Elective for Extension English 1. Keats' poetry is also technically featured as the annotations outline the role of specific poems in forming the core of the film, the way in which a contemporary text such as Bright Star can 'embrace' the Romantic period, and the congruence between the film's visual metaphors and Keats' use of poetic techniques.

Verdict: Teaching Keats or any of the Romantic poets successfully would be highly dependent on the teacher's level of interest, however, that said, I think Bright Star provides an effective foundation for the 'textual conversation' angle of Module A. Students could look at the ways in which the prescribed poetry has been reflected in the film. I'm not privy to the design process behind this part of the curriculum but, on watching Bright Star, I wouldn't be surprised if the curation of the prescribed suite was backward-engineered from the film. One caveat I will mention here though is that Bright Star is a quiet and gentle piece of cinema, and I'd bear this in mind when choosing your pattern of study for your Advanced English class as some students may struggle with its pace.


Ariel by Sylvia Plath and Birthday Letters by Ted Hughes
Sylvia Plath poetry
  • Daddy
  • Nick and the Candlestick
  • A Birthday Present
  • Lady Lazarus
  • Fever 103
  • The Arrival of the Bee Box
Ted Hughes poetry
  • Fulbright Scholars
  • The Shot
  • A Picture of Otto
  • Fever
  • Red
  • The Bee God
What are they: Plath's suite of poetry, published posthumously in 1965, is replete with biting anger and obsessive motifs - a series of folding perspectives encapsulating Holocaust and WWII allusions, events in the years preceding Plath's suicide, and the frustration felt by the poet in regard to her husband's unfaithfulness and a feeling of gender-based restriction. More than 30 years later, in 1998, Plath's one-time husband Ted Hughes released his own collection of poetry shortly before his death from cancer. The Hughes suite included here echoes and refracts the events and ideas alluded to in Plath's, offering a more direct view of the marriage, albeit from a subjective perspective.  

Scope for Study: Where do I start? The relationship between Plath and Hughes has been the subject of much controversy over the years and, within the context of the #MeToo movement, it continues to provoke a range of responses - the volatile and vitriolic, the cold and cautious, the invested and engaged. Both sets of poems are worthy of study in the most objective sense - shaped by robust, sharp, highly crafted, and/or superbly incisive language. Students will need to be careful when approaching the context and paratext that surrounds these interlinked bodies of work; careful that this element doesn't unduly weigh against their understanding of the texts from a technical standpoint. That said, a balance needs to be struck in regard to the contextual elements of the poetry - the writing doesn't exist in a vacuum. 

NESA Annotations: Surprisingly, unfortunately, there are no annotations on either Plath or Hughes in any of the last three annotation documents.

Verdict: Is the poetry meant to be read in the order given by the syllabus, or in the order presented by the books? Does it even matter? I would venture that they should be read in the order prescribed... Hughes' poetry in particular has been arranged above to follow a logical order that helps to construct a useful narrative that will assist students with framing their understanding of the relationship between the two poets. Teachers looking to teach this pair of texts might need to have an extra awareness of the wellbeing of their individual students first... I would be concerned that some students might be triggered or pulled off-course by the dark subject matter and the ongoing criticism of the Plath/Hughes relationship. The teacher would need to have sufficient experience. I'd tread lightly... to be honest, as much as I'm personally drawn to the poetry, I would probably just avoid teaching it altogether.

The Tempest by William Shakespeare and Hag-Seed by Margaret Atwood
What are they: The Tempest is one of Shakespeare's last plays and remains an enigmatic work that confounds the usual classification of his work into 'tragedy' or 'comedy' genres, being as it combines elements of both in its tale of exile, magic, revenge, love, and politics. Margaret Atwood''s 21st century novel Hag Seed tells the story of a disgraced director who re-stages the play as part of an education program in a prison, with Atwood portraying the text in its process of adaptation whilst simultaneously retelling Prospero's story through Felix, the director who uses the prisoners to execute his own elaborate plan of vengeance.

Scope for Study: Hag-Seed exemplifies the brief of Textual Conversations as it metatextually comes at The Tempest from two completely separate directions. On one hand, the novel explicitly depicts the staging of the play and features the discussion of its characters and themes throughout in the form of the education program that Felix runs. On the other hand, the novel is also structured along the same lines as The Tempest, with characters, themes, events, and plot points all forming an analogous mirror for Shakespeare's play. Students will be able to examine the layers of Atwood's lightly-staged but heavily intertextual retelling whilst using the original play as a reference point.

NESA Annotations: The new 2019-2023 Annotations outline The Tempest as a text that deals with themes of ambition, authority, power, captivity, and loyalty, and Hag-Seed as "a complex conversation with The Tempest that takes the reader into the worlds of the play". The annotations highlight Atwood's clever use of Shakespearean language, the way that knowledge of The Tempest can enhance an understanding of the character of Felix in Hag-Seed, and the way students can use Atwood's epilogue as a jumping-off point for their own interpretations of Shakespeare's text.

Verdict: One thing that is implicit in this pairing is the concept that Hag-Seed demonstrates the way in which Shakespeare's texts are continuously adapted and re-adapted for new audiences, and how this can both highlight the relevance of his plays in the contemporary setting whilst also creating new meaning that reflects new contexts. I would venture that, with consideration of the way that the Advanced English course is structured and the requirements of the pattern of study, that the Tempest / Hag-Seed combo will end up being the go-to choice within Module A. Considering the accessibility of Atwood's text and its insightful, unambiguous relationship with The Tempest, that's not necessarily a bad thing.

Tuesday, May 12, 2020

Book Journeys: Grendel

Beowulf is a famous Anglo-Saxon poem from around the 9th century about a warrior (Beowulf) who slays three monsters - Grendel, Grendel's Mother, and a Dragon. This book by John Gardner is a postmodern retelling of the first part of the story from Grendel's point of view. 

It's said that you need to have read Beowulf, or be familiar with it, to be able to follow Gardner's narrative. The writer certainly intends this, but I think only a passing familiarity is really necessary. The above paragraph of this very blog would probably be all the prior information you would need, I never really knew all that much about the poem/myth ahead of the first time I read this book and I don't think it hindered my enjoyment whatsoever - especially considering that Grendel is one of my all-time favourite novels. 

It's a fairly slight book, more of a novella than a novel, but it's by no means a simple work - it has a certain density and complexity. Gardner uses the basics of medieval myth to deconstruct humanity and some of the philosophies that power the very essence of our civilisation. He does this with a sort of academic wryness that often comes across as blackly humourous. 

Grendel is a brutish and crude figure. He is cruel and ugly and every bit the monster he is portrayed to be in other versions of the tale Beowulf. Gardner has gone to great lengths to keep his protagonist monstrous in both appearance and personality. Grendel is by no means stupid though, he is confused by his own existence and angered by the differences between himself and everyone around him. His own mother is a depraved and loathsome creature that he is unable to communicate with, the local Dragon is all-knowing but nihilistic and does little to help reconcile his point of view with the world, and the village of humans that Grendel spends twelve years of his life observing, molesting, taunting, and waging war on, are so far removed from his own understanding of life that they only fuel his confusion to the point of outright fury.


The 'hero' Beowulf himself doesn't turn up until the last sequences of the novel and remains unnamed, which is fitting considering this narrative has been re-centred from the monster's perspective. Grendel's confrontation with the village's saviour is resoundingly ambivalent and provocative. Grendel is a miserable and bored creature, neither superior or inferior to the little people he torments... he's like an ur-anti-hero, and this book really pulls apart the foundations of concepts like 'heroes' and 'villains' in a big way. 

There's something highly engaging and amusing about Grendel's detached interpretation of the village's growth. His view of its advancement characterises humans as a parasitic and stupid species. The monster's prime motivation for wreaking so much havoc among them is boredom and curiosity, which is perhaps more relatable than most readers would care to admit. 

In terms of style, Gardner uses a lot of stream-of-consciousness to explore Grendel's thoughts and the novel is written mostly in present tense. When I first read Grendel I was quite impressed by the way it sustained a present tense narrative - I'd never much liked present tense before but Gardner converted me into seeing how it can work and I've used it more often in my own writing since.

Anyway, I highly recommend Grendel. If there is such a thing as a canon then I would put this book in it as it has so much that going for it - it's entertaining, intellectually stimulating, intertextual, amusing, tragic, and subversive. I'm yet to find another book even remotely like it.

Sunday, June 23, 2019

Textual Conversations: The Tempest & Hag-Seed


Hi students (and teachers!), here you will find materials associated with the Module B: Textual Conversations Tempest / Hag-Seed option. 
 
This was initially presented in 2019 at the Central West HSC Enrichment Seminars at Denison College, in association with Charles Sturt University. The versions linked here have been UPDATED to reflect what was presented for the Aurora College HSC Study Seminars in 2022.

This is the PPT on The Tempest / Hag-Seed.
This is the booklet of material that goes with the PPT.
And here are some additional resources on these two texts:
Happy textual conversing!

Thursday, November 29, 2018

Dracula and Extension English 1

Artist's impression of teacher at the end of the school year.
Hi! It's 2018 and I'm presenting at this year's English Teacher's Association on a few things, including the use of Bram Stoker's Dracula as the key text for the Year 11 Extension English 1 course. Here is a copy of the PowerPoint for this session:
A quick caveat: I'm no expert when it comes to Extension English 1 but, having just finished teaching the Year 11 Texts, Culture and Value module, I do have some resources and ideas to share and that's what this blog post represents. 

Here are the resources handed out in the session: 
And here are some additional resources touched on in the session:
Enjoy!